Shawn L. Bird

Original poetry, commentary, and fiction. All copyrights reserved.

metaphor for the publication journey February 1, 2011

Filed under: Grace Awakening,Poetry,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 7:22 am
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The sun is gleaming
so brightly that the snow is blinding.
The future’s so bright I’ve got to wear shades.

Every day another supporter, another booster,

another enthusiastic participant
in the waiting game asks, “WHEN?”
Soon, I assure them. Soon!

A flicker on the computer screen
“I hate to have to tell you…”
and a gleaming dream
is buried in a white out of
black uncertainty.
I don’t know now, I have to tell them
I can’t see anymore.

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80 minutes ago I received word that the publisher for Grace Awakening is closing down in 30 days.  Grace was scheduled for release in 240 days.  That is 210 days too late, unfortunately.  Now we’re back to peddling a manuscript.  Poor Grace!

 

How to be published: step one January 21, 2011

Filed under: Commentary,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 9:58 pm
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I’m getting asked a lot about how to be published these days.  I’m not exactly an expert in this field, because I’m still in the process of having my first novel published.  However, I’ve been researching and I know the steps so I’m happy to share with you.  I can talk about resources for putting together queries, finding agents or publishers, etc.  It’s fairly straight-forward stuff, available all over the internet. (Check out www.writersdigest.com for a start).

None of that information is valuable if no one wants to read what you’re writing, though.  Publishing is a business. Your work has to be timely and marketable.   So let’s look at the basics.

1. story

What are you writing about?  Is it worth reading?  Is it interesting? Is it funny? Is there a proper story arc (exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and denouement)  Do you lead the reader through with tension?  Do they want to keep reading?

 Is the topic current?  If the topic has been exhausted already (i.e. I wouldn’t want to try to market a vampire manuscript at the moment!) or if it is  dated, you need to find a modern, interesting angle to your work.  Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice was a classic with universal themes, but not many modern readers were on the edge of their seat flipping its pages.  Seth Grahame-Smith’s Pride and Prejudice with Zombies, however, put an new spin on the classic and brought readers flocking to it.

2.  pace

Have you edited your work to ensure that it grabs the reader and doesn’t let go?  Have you cut and cut and cut so that the reduncies have been removed?   Have you started us in the middle of the action so we’re instantly captivated by the characters and conflict?

3. format

Do you actually know the conventions?  Do you know how to spell correctly? How to format your dialogue correctly?  How to punctuate?  How to craft sentences?  How to paragraph?

Go look at the books in the library.  Study those of your genre.  If you manuscript doesn’t look like those published works, it is less likely to be accepted by an agent, editor or publisher.

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These are the main pointers I’ve learned at the many workshops and in the many writing books I’ve stumbled across in the last couple of years.   The lack of these things appears to be the bane of the agents, editors and publishers.  They repeat the same things constantly, so obviously the writers aren’t listening.  You want to make it as easy as possible for them.  Give them a great idea, great writing, and a great format.  Show them you’re going to make it easy to work with you. 

Write well little writers!

 

writerly world January 3, 2011

Filed under: Commentary,Pondering,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:35 pm
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Shawn at the computer

I’m just pondering how much of our identity is defined by what people know of us. For years I’ve been crafting  poetry and stories, but aside from the odd person who received a poetic gift or judged in a contest, no one ‘outside’ has known that part of my life. I have been “an English teacher” first and foremost. Of course, I’m an English teacher because I love words and love reading and love sharing that passion with young people. Occasionally I light a spark and some kid discovers that joy or I get to delight in encouraging some amazing talents in their infancy. It’s a great job.

Now I have a new identity. When I’m introduced, it’s more often as “writer” than “teacher.” It’s strange to have people redefine me so suddenly and so thoroughly.

I had dreams of being a writer someday, and now my dream is so recognised that others use the label. It’s kind of crazy when dreams come true.

May 2011 be the year that you see dreams coming true as well.  May you enjoy the fruits of your efforts and the satisfaction of reaching your goals.

 

Photo: me in my writer zone with my resources close and the computer in front of me.

 

floating December 19, 2010

Filed under: Poetry,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 12:57 am
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There is poetry floating
in the place between waking and dreaming.
There are words meant for grace
between taking and scheming.
There’s a joy born to be
in the stories we’re making
There’s a truth there for me
worth the undertaking.

 

happiness is… December 8, 2010

Filed under: Grace Awakening,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 7:22 am

…finishing the editing of the novel and sending the manuscript off to the publisher!  See that happy smile?  That is the smile of an author who has just achieved another major milestone in her publishing career!  😀

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Of course, this just means that there is more editing ahead, but this time it will be collaborative editing, and I’m looking forward to the analytical part of that process.

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Writing is such a solitary pursuit, it is really wonderful when someone with skills looks at the manuscript and says, “Why is this happening?  Do you really need this section?” etc.  The challenge of that makes you really consider why things are as they are and determine whether the manuscript is at its best with that section as it is.  I have had a lot of people read through Grace Awakening and ask those kinds of questions.  I was told that I needed to improve battle scenes, that lunch changed, that some things were refered to before they’d happened, that certain things needed to be clarified…  Every time some great advice like those tidbits comes along, it improves the story, so I am very thankful for the ‘beta readers’ who have contributed real aid to the process.

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 Thanks Vikki, Samy, Ethan, Angela, Brittany

for your participation in this adventure! 

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Thanks also for the enthusiastic encouragement of those of you who read a draft  and just said, “I loved it!!  When is the next one coming out?” because that is great to hear as well.  I am so honoured by the community support as I advance along in this adventure.  Thanks for joining me on the journey!

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Just TEN more months until Grace Awakening is published!

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Ares and Mars November 23, 2010

Filed under: Grace Awakening,Mythology,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 4:42 am

Mythology crosses time and cultures.  Stories provide the metaphorical framework to explain the world.  Society needs story.  We all need to make sense of our experiences.  Every culture does this through its own mythology.

In Grace Awakening, there is a mixture of both Greek and Roman  mythology represented together as characters mingle together.  Why?  Although the Graces are Greek, they do exist within the Roman pantheon as well.  For some gods/goddesses the names change, but the character of the individuals remains essentially the same.  However, some are distinctly different and although they have things in common, those differences mean that the Greek and Roman gods are different novel characters.

Most significantly this is seen with Ares and Mars.  The Greek god of war, Ares, was known to be impetuous, rage prone and overly emotional.  He battled with unfocused violence.  On the other hand, Mars, the Roman god of war, represented all that was best of Roman military might.  It was all about control, preparation and strength. He was a skilled tactian; his wars were won with strategy as well as power.  As a result, we were able to see distinctive war gods who play very different roles in the book.

It is fun to play with that academic interpretations of mythological characters, and to develop them into realistic individuals who can live in your neighborhood.   That tough bearded guy glaring at you from that truck could be Ares.  That friendly guy who beats everyone at the gym due to his calculated strength could be Mars.  You never know the life behind the face, but with imagination you can create quite a world in every glance.

 

Congratulations! November 22, 2010

Filed under: Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 5:40 pm

I am delighted to share my excitement with you as it was announced today that my former student and talented young writer Shvaugn Craig has won a 3 hour writing competition at Okanagan College this week.  She won a $750 prize (that’s $250 an hour!).  Shvaugn has a lovely website.  I invite you to explore her world. 

I wish I could take credit for her skill, but she was already an amazing writer before she arrived in my class in grade 11.  Both aptitude and attitude are needed for success.  A lot of practice hones the skills.  One must generate a lot of words before the ability to find the best ones becomes clear.  So if you want to be a writer someday, you must write!  Poems, letters, journals, blog, etc are all part of disciplining your thoughts, learning to narrow your focus, and learning how to choose the best words.

As a writer, you must also read.  Read what you love, of course, but also expand your horizons.  Learn from the masters.  Learn what makes a classic timeless.  Observe how words are used, how sentences are pruned.  Embrace new vocabulary.  You cannot be a good writer without being a good reader. 

Shvaugn is a perfect example of the success that occurs when one is truly  living the writers’ life.  You have to submit to publications to get published.  You have to enter contests to win them.  You have to put in the time.  Eventually, your effort will be rewarded.

 Way to go, Shvaugn!

 

words are mutable November 13, 2010

Filed under: Commentary,Grace Awakening,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 8:40 pm

I’m working through my solo final edit of Grace Awakening before the manuscript heads off to the publisher.  I’m excited about sending it off and what comes next– editing some more! At that point I’ll have the benefit of a professional editor, and I’m really looking forward to learning from that process.  I can’t believe that I am still fixing, tightening, and eliminating chunks on EVERY page even after editing it twenty or more times already.  So today I’m thinking the most important writing advice is

“Don’t fall in love with your words!”  

Why?  Because you will have to change them, improve them or remove them to improve the story.  Words are just a part of the whole, and the whole is improved with polished parts.

 

being a statistic November 10, 2010

Filed under: Commentary,Grace Awakening,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 7:24 pm
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Meg Tilley says in her blog (September 9, 2010) that of 1.5 million books published in a year, only 1.68% will sell 5000 copies in a year.  I’m not sure if she talking worldwide, English speaking world, US, Canada or what.  1.68% seems like an impossibly miniscule number.  My math is always suspect (i.e. please correct me if you are good at this!) but by my calculations that 1.68% of 1.5 million equals about twenty-five thousand books.  That sounds much more do-able.  I can be one of those lucky twenty-five thousand books that hit over five thousand in sales, right? Let’s do it together, okay? 

In Canada a best seller is 3000 copies a week.  Can we do it?

 

Gratia gratiam parit November 9, 2010

Filed under: Commentary,Grace Awakening,Writing — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:35 am
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I discovered a fascinating Latin Proverbs blog today:

http://audiolatinproverbs.blogspot.com

The proverb that drew me to the site was Gratia gratiam parit.   It is a rather profound proverb, because gratia has so many diverse meanings. Consider that favour, esteem, regard, liking, love, friendship,agreeableness, pleasantness, charm, beauty, grace, loveliness, courtesy, service, blessing, obligation, gratitude return, requital and acknowledgment are all components of gratia.

In this proverb grace is both the subject (gratia) and the object (gratiam).  Parit is the verb which means birth.  Think of it as creating, making, causing something to be.

I’m no Latin scholar, but the brilliance seems pretty clear.  Look at this list of definitions.  Now mix and match:

Favour

Esteem

Regard

Liking

Love

friendship

agreeableness

pleasantness

charm

beauty

grace

loveliness

courtesy

service

obligation

blessing

gratitude

giving back

requital

acknowledgment

 …creates Favour

Esteem

Regard

Liking

Love

friendship

agreeableness

pleasantness

charm

beauty

grace

loveliness

courtesy

service

obligation

blessing

gratitude

giving back

requital

acknowledgment

It’s kind of profound, isn’t it? What you put out, is what you get back, in all sorts of permutations.  Think of what it means in the context of the theme of Grace Awakening.  Grace herself is awakening to her birthright, Grace is creating Grace (and the 3 Graces create Grace, as well).  Fascinating stuff.