Shawn L. Bird

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poem- critics July 24, 2015

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:39 am
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The ground squirrels have been offering endless entertainment

Daily theatre of gamboling fun with whistle accompaniment.

First I saw a lady with a  trap

Then all the ground squirrels were gone.

End of the play.

Critics are deadly.

 

2 Responses to “poem- critics”

  1. righteousbruin9 Says:
    July 24, 2015 at 4:07 pm

    Criticism- a trap, when the bait is tainted with jealousy.

    Reply

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