Shawn L. Bird

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poem-used October 17, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 10:48 pm
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I used to

close my eyes

and wish.

Now I

open my eyes

and celebrate.

 

19 Responses to “poem-used”

  1. Kurt Brindley ✍ ✄ ✍ Says:
    October 17, 2014 at 10:58 pm

    Man I really like this, Shawn.

    Reply
  2. Tom Says:
    October 18, 2014 at 3:09 am

    The challenge, for me, is the “open my eyes” part, the seeing but not perceiving part. Your poem is so short, so good, inspired.

    Reply
  3. dokurtybitz Says:
    October 18, 2014 at 6:26 am

    Lovely words, I like this

    Reply
  4. bdzerda Says:
    October 18, 2014 at 9:11 am

    a poem that has a lot of good vibes in it. thanks shawn!

    Reply
  6. topazo Says:
    October 18, 2014 at 2:18 pm

    you did pursue your dreams!

    Reply
  8. Book Club Mom Says:
    October 20, 2014 at 5:07 am

    What a great way to think!

    Reply

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