Shawn L. Bird

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poem-breath July 26, 2014

Filed under: fun,Poetry,poodles — Shawn L. Bird @ 7:07 pm
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Your breath

on this hot day

softly

panting

beside me

is so putrid

I can’t explain

why I adore

you.

.

But

I

do.

.

.

.

(dog love)

 

23 Responses to “poem-breath”

  1. leahsbarrett Says:

    I understand that fur-baby love

  2. bmagpub Says:

    So true – and thank you for giving me a chuckle 😀

  3. cphickey77 Says:

    I have a doggie too, but I was enjoying it as if it were human, until the end. 🙂

  4. Me too! My cats anoint me with fish/tuna breath Love everyday! LOL!!

  5. JD Hamil Says:

    Hah! Brilliant.

  6. kiwiskan Says:

    Understand – we have a dog also

  7. Ah, I know that pant, and love, so very well. Very cute!

  8. pavanneh Says:

    Really get this one. 😀 My dog..phew…but I love him to death.

  9. migueltio Says:

    Leaves me breathless! Love it!

  10. timthepoet Says:

    We love our cat. Like you loving your dog. Our cat has okay breath I think.


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