Shawn L. Bird

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Poem- What I learned July 21, 2014

Filed under: Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 11:35 am
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What I learned about you:

  • you did not hang the stars
  • you did not shave the moon
  • you did not fuel the sun
  • you make me super nova
  • you make me new each months
  • you make me shine

What I learned about us:

  • we’re celestial
  • we’re changing
  • we’re burning
 

21 Responses to “Poem- What I learned”

  1. I really love all the poetry you’ve been writing and posting! Thanks for being such an inspiration. 🙂

  2. cphickey77 Says:

    compulsion=propulsion. always keep moving. Great work 🙂

  3. pomolio Says:

    I think that is very nice that you wrote ,,shave the moon and fuel the sun” it is not romantic however, words moon and sun are romantic and reflect a woman and a man but normal activities makes them like normal persons, who have their day routine and roles in the life. And I love this 🙂

  4. Bookgirl Says:

    I’m looking at the sky differently now -thanks

  5. words4jp Says:

    What a dreamy piece – I can imagine floating in space ……. Cool;)

  6. Lisa Says:

    What an awesome truth. 🙂

  7. Thank you for visiting and following my new blog. I’m looking forward to yours. “You did not shave the moon.” Beautiful.

  8. Megan Says:

    Such gorgeous imagery in this. Not too many people are brave enough to use the cosmos in their writing.


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