Shawn L. Bird

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poem- drinking problem August 27, 2013

Filed under: fun,Poetry — Shawn L. Bird @ 2:18 pm
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Your rose velvet tongue

washes with water, cool and clear

You stretch and strain as if to gather

rain drops-

but stop!

Listen!

as you lick those glistening lips,

Your kisses become unwelcome, quick!

We stand  disgusted and agog:

Don’t drink

from the toilet,

dog!

 

29 Responses to “poem- drinking problem”

  1. coconutspeak Says:

    Just love humorous endings! Bravo!

  2. love this! poetry needs more funny, I think

  3. words4jp Says:

    my little girl did this as a puppy, and thankfully she outgrew it. but i will say this much – she makes the biggest mess when she drinks – and she sounds like a horse!

  4. deaniedaisy24 Says:

    Reblogged this on deaniedaisy24's Blog.

  5. Eva PoeteX Says:

    Hahah, I absolutely love the ending. I did not see that coming. ^_^ Nice poem!

  6. Love the humorous surprise ending! LOL!! I get fishy tuna breath kisses from my cats mornings and evenings. For a while Weezer did try to drink from the toilet bowl but thank goodness he stopped! Now both Sylvester and Weezer drink from the water dish.

  7. eacieri Says:

    Very funny and accurate.We love our dog but he is really gross sometimes. 🙂

  8. Elizabeth Mendiola Says:

    Cute! 😉

  9. Melody J Haislip Says:

    Lips that touch toilet water shall never touch mine! Clever ending! 🙂

  10. kiwiskan Says:

    Made me laugh – and the ending is great

  11. BOO, TALKING ABOUT LEADING ME ON..HAHA…GOOD WRITING THOUGH..,SNAP SNAP SNAP

  12. Mike Says:

    If you keep doing that to me I’ll read your poetry backwards!

  13. Brenda Says:

    Nice use of language, love the building of peaceful, beautiful images to the wrenching conclusion — definitely made me laugh!


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